Sir Michael DeVil

Sir Michael DeVil
Sir Michael DeVil
My soon to be ex
Is a jerk and a pill.
I cannot wait to try to break his will
For being
Deceiving
I’ll take his abode and make him fulfill
His alimony obligations, what a thrill!

Sir Michael at first glance seems like a great guy
But once you see behind his suave veneer
The man will cheat and lie
Then leave you high and dry
And only when he needs you reappear.

This dangerous viper
This liar and creep
Should be shot by a sniper
Or be put to sleep
My life was such a peaceful one until
Sir Michael, Sir Michael DeVil.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 6:19 AM
The catharsis of poetry in high gear! Congrats, Irene!
Hammer Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 6:27 AM
Thanks so much, Kim. Yep, working it out...
James Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 12:23 PM
Congratulations on your win. Emilia : )
Hammer Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 6:27 AM
Thank you Emilia.
Woods Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 12:05 PM
Oh my! I'd say poor guy but I'll take your word for it! Good rhymes and dark humor!
Hammer Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 6:27 AM
Crystol, I bet his poem would paint me in a pretty negative light. Fortunately, he doesn't write them. :)
Scragg Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 9:24 AM
Hello Irene. Thank you for entering the contest. And huge congrats on making top ten. Your song teaches the importance of not taking people at face value. They can be misjudged good OR bad. And we can find ourselves very disappointed with true colours. The resulting anger of deception is clear in this song. A good write for the contest :-D
Hammer Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 6:28 AM
Thanks, Natasha. I appreciate it. I think the singer has her own issues. :)
Bartley Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 8:02 AM
Love this! Contest entry?
Bartley Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 1:52 PM
Good luck! I think you should win!
Hammer Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 12:56 PM
Thank you for the compliment. It is a contest entry. Wish me luck! :)
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