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Sir Michael DeVil

Sir Michael DeVil Sir Michael DeVil My soon to be ex Is a jerk and a pill. I cannot wait to try to break his will For being Deceiving I’ll take his abode and make him fulfill His alimony obligations, what a thrill! Sir Michael at first glance seems like a great guy But once you see behind his suave veneer The man will cheat and lie Then leave you high and dry And only when he needs you reappear. This dangerous viper This liar and creep Should be shot by a sniper Or be put to sleep My life was such a peaceful one until Sir Michael, Sir Michael DeVil.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/30/2024 6:19:00 AM

The catharsis of poetry in high gear! Congrats, Irene!

Irene Hammer
Date: 6/5/2024 6:27:00 AM

Thanks so much, Kim. Yep, working it out...

Emilia James

Date: 5/29/2024 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Emilia : )

Irene Hammer
Date: 6/5/2024 6:27:00 AM

Thank you Emilia.

Crystol Woods

Date: 5/29/2024 12:05:00 PM

Oh my! I'd say poor guy but I'll take your word for it! Good rhymes and dark humor!

Irene Hammer
Date: 6/5/2024 6:27:00 AM

Crystol, I bet his poem would paint me in a pretty negative light. Fortunately, he doesn't write them. :)

Natasha L Scragg

Date: 5/29/2024 9:24:00 AM

Hello Irene. Thank you for entering the contest. And huge congrats on making top ten. Your song teaches the importance of not taking people at face value. They can be misjudged good OR bad. And we can find ourselves very disappointed with true colours. The resulting anger of deception is clear in this song. A good write for the contest :-D

Irene Hammer
Date: 6/5/2024 6:28:00 AM

Thanks, Natasha. I appreciate it. I think the singer has her own issues. :)

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 5/22/2024 8:02:00 AM

Love this! Contest entry?

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 5/22/2024 1:52:00 PM

Good luck! I think you should win!

Irene Hammer
Date: 5/22/2024 12:56:00 PM

Thank you for the compliment. It is a contest entry. Wish me luck! :)