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Sipping Coffee

Alabaster streaks of warmth in its dewy first glow, tepidly stirring the senses, as my gaze roams to the trickle of ebony beads; in the distance, chimes of granular dustings, with fragrances rich in mahogany earthen grounds, shaking the last of the quondam night’s moon specks, as life’s poignant rays seep deep into my sights, coaxing myself out of hibernation, longing for the first sip of sunshine, basking in the early beams of balmy dawns and sepia sunsets, blessed to start and end the sands of time with you— upon my soul’s sanctuary, my lucid dream ablaze. "God within me is the enjoyer of the aroma As also this dopamine boosting flavour I taste I surrender all pleasures to the dweller of my heart Breath by breath thus that my soul presence be chaste"

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Date: 1/12/2024 9:08:00 PM
This is so beautiful. Another poet full of gems...
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Date: 1/12/2024 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/11/2024 12:11:00 PM
I'm proud and happy for you amore?, you deep breathtaking words show me your grace and beauty in your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose.You are a paintress with the palette of your seraphic majestic aura painting your sapphire emotion with bright colors and shades of grace and elegance,my Korean prinncess. You are my poetry in my heart for eternity,mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito sempre amore mio i love you deeply micia.il nostro eterno amore
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Date: 1/11/2024 3:40:00 AM
You write like a star of heaven, this is both beautiful and strong dear Fading Star. Congrats on your win
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:43:00 PM
Fading Star Silence, your poem beautifully captures the sensory symphony of mornings, from alabaster streaks to sepia sunsets. The imagery of ebony beads and mahogany grounds evokes a rich tapestry of sensations. The fusion of earthly fragrances and the dawn's warmth becomes a poetic ritual, a soulful journey from hibernation to basking in the sunshine. A delightful ode to the joy of sipping life's moments. Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 1/10/2024 3:27:00 PM
Holy coffee beans Fader! This is deep and delicious. Got me wishing for my morning cuppa right now before bed. Wee hoo
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Date: 1/10/2024 12:20:00 PM
I love this so much amore your deep passionate words make me feel your deep pure love within your,rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose.The grace, elegance and soft touch of yourlove language in sapphire deepest emotions create a masterpiece of intense shivers of devotion, my korean princess.You leave me breathless loving each part of you like a rare blue gem,my marvelous creature.Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amoremio i love you deeply micia..mia passione per sempre..tuo..il nostro eterno amore
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Date: 1/10/2024 12:10:00 PM
Ah my beautiful soul sis! This is so beautiful and so metaphorical yet so soulful with such creative artistry flowing seamlessly for coffee theme! You as a coffee lover nailed it with coffee related metaphors and also colors painting such a picturesque and soothing artwork that left me in awe! Especially , “ fragrances rich in mahogany earthen grounds, shaking the last of the quondam night’s moon specks,” wow!!! Just love that! “ basking in the early beams of balmy dawns and sepia sunsets”
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Date: 1/10/2024 12:11:00 PM
Just wow! Im in awe of the way you’ve written that and used alliterations too! In such a flawless manner! You really leave me speechless with your poetic skills! Truly! This is a fave for me! Best wishes for the contest! Its so good to see you do other contests too now!

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