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Sipping Coffee

Downloading in my coffee machine Is sacred sanity peppered peace Relaxing all the violet vanity With a powerful cocoa bean I like the taste and the smell It really is my aphrodisiac I will celebrate will not yell If you offer it even just black Beam me up a cup of love Of coffee never get enough “God within me is the enjoyer of the aroma As also this dopamine boosting flavour I taste I surrender all pleasures to the dweller of my heart Breath by breath thus that my soul presence be chaste”

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Date: 1/4/2024 6:49:00 PM
Mmmm! I love coffee, especially with caramel, the delicious aroma is so wonderful. I lift my coffee mug to you Karen, heres to another cup! I need a refill after reading your poem :)
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/5/2024 4:40:00 AM
Bj go on and enjoy more coffee! I like hazelnut creamer in mine! Thanks for reading. :0)
Date: 1/2/2024 3:25:00 PM
although I'm not a coffee drinker, I love the smell of it wafting through the air...just that alone wakes me up and lifts my spirits. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 1/2/2024 3:30:00 PM
Thanks Sara! I was addicted and had to cut back. lol
Date: 1/2/2024 8:07:00 AM
Nothing beats it Karen, I know I drink too much but the smell and the taste are to die for. Cheers. Tom
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 8:16:00 AM
Yes it is addictive. I like hazelnut but have stopped drinking it as often! Hugs Tom
Date: 1/2/2024 6:46:00 AM
Your description of the pleasant sensations and thoughts linked to coffee that you have elucidated here, while also establishing a profound spiritual connection, is truly remarkable, Karen.
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 6:48:00 AM
Wow really? I appreciate that but think my poem is no where near a contender! Thanks Sotto!
Date: 1/2/2024 6:42:00 AM
I only have one coffee a day and that is in the morning, its enough to keep me going, but it has to be a good cup of coffee, I do not do instant.. just good quality bean cafe... enjoyed your poem and its a good one for the contest.. all the best..
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 6:51:00 AM
Thanks Silent One. I have no real confidence that it will place. Thanks so much!
Date: 1/2/2024 6:24:00 AM
This is a beautiful write dear Karen.. I absolutely love the sweet textures and reveries associated with coffee that you've described here whilst connecting with a higher spiritual depth here.. "Downloading in my coffee machine Is sacred sanity peppered peace" I like that opening line, quite intriguing for the reader and also, "Breath by breath thus that my soul presence be chaste" Ahh, gorgeous.. Such sublime serenity flows in this poem..Sending you my best wishes for the New Year as well :)
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Karen Jones
Date: 1/2/2024 6:49:00 AM
Thanks Hiya! Happy New Year!

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