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Sipping coffee, soul shifts from me to we, since ceasing thinking, we begin feeling, one with oneness, as head and heart agree, savouring this elixir appealing. Surrendering the taste by us savoured, to God’s presence pulsating in our heart, divine entwined, aroma love flavoured, with each sip we feel bliss ignition start. Conspiring with God in all that we do, rapture of each life pulse is amplified, for there remains in us no egoic glue, knowing He dwells in cave of heart inside. Even as senses delight, our clear sight ensures we cling not to time in its flight.

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Date: 1/3/2024 7:25:00 AM
I’m not a coffee drinker but I appreciate the sentiments of this piece.
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:45:00 AM
The idea is to recognise God as the experiencer or enjoyer of our activities, moment to moment and so we should be mindful as also in surrender.
Date: 12/31/2023 10:38:00 PM
Oh wow, this is such a beautifully heartwarming sonnet, "Conspiring with God in all that we do" this sums it all so well.. And those ending lines, so brilliantly crafted with so much depth and insight, a wonderful post for the New Year too.. Keep writing and inspiring us, sending my best wishes :)
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Date: 1/1/2024 12:14:00 AM
Thank you, Hiya, God bless and wish you a happy new year
Date: 12/31/2023 9:27:00 PM
lovely
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Date: 1/1/2024 12:14:00 AM
Thank you, Mat

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