Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Sipping Champagne

My body's all aching and wracked with pain
Not sure I want to travel this highway again
Once is enough
Journey's been tough
Who am I kidding, life's been like sipping champagne

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Janice Canerdy September 19, 2018 at 4:08 PM Great limerick--with feeling! Janice

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 21, 2018 at 12:41 PM Serving strawberries with that, lakeside. xomo Jack Ellison August 21, 2018 at 12:56 PM Whatever turns your thingy!!! Ah yes, lakeside... so peaceful!!! XOX

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon August 21, 2018 at 9:45 AM The journey of life, so tough a journey. Message received. Nicely adorned lines from you, Elison Jack Ellison August 21, 2018 at 12:55 PM You are very kind my dear friend... thank you, sir!!!

Sand Blown August 21, 2018 at 6:46 AM "...would you care for another glass of ...'grape juice'...this morning sir...?" Jack Ellison August 21, 2018 at 7:00 AM Actually, I'd much prefer grape juice, thank you! I never imbibe!!! Good morning friend!!!