Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

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Sins After Midnight

SINS AFTER MIDNIGHT

dig deeper dagger
whilst i hold the golden stake
crowd shuffles nervously
cautiously applauding
sins whispered in the dark

Kim Rodrigues ©Feb 2017

Oscar madness causes me to write!

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Gary Bateman February 28, 2017 at 2:29 PM Hello Kim, I enjoyed your thought here. Looks like the influence of the Oscars is very strong indeed!! All The Best, Gary Kim Rodrigues February 28, 2017 at 5:04 PM Well poetically speaking...anyway! :)

Chris Green February 27, 2017 at 9:14 AM It seems poetic justice that they spent the entire evening jabbing at someone else only to have the dagger find them at the very end. Nicely done Kim. Kim Rodrigues February 27, 2017 at 9:25 AM Perhaps an angel handed them the mischievous envelope! Won't they learn to entertain!

Cheryl Hoffman February 27, 2017 at 8:57 AM Great poem about the Oscars Kim~you got to wonder about the facade of it all! Enjoyed!~Che :) Kim Rodrigues February 27, 2017 at 8:58 AM Thanks so much, Cheryl! All of their blah blah blah...then they drop the ball. Perhaps an angel handed them the wrong envelope?