Sinners

Slowing losing our mind, May God have mercy on our soul.

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Felix Abbey-Mensah

Date: 6/9/2011 12:11:00 PM

Mercy said no... Am not gonna let you go.... We need all the mercy from God... Cos we are all sinners

Curtis White

Date: 6/3/2011 11:51:00 AM

The writer is talking about the deep rooted sinners. Right Leigh?

Leigh Nickolyn
Date: 6/3/2011 12:29:00 PM

Of course. I was talking about all. Not one in particular or just me.

Ned Flanders

Date: 6/3/2011 10:57:00 AM

The only thing i can agree with you about this is the categorie Religion. Apart from that what are you telling me? You really have to elaborate this so it makes more sense..i have to ask why the use of the word "our"and not "my". Cheers.

Leigh Nickolyn
Date: 6/3/2011 12:31:00 PM

I'm sorry if this doesn't make any sense to you. To me poetry doesn't have to make sense for it to be poetry. I used "our" because i was talking about all sinners. Not just me or one person.

Brittany Allen

Date: 6/3/2011 10:42:00 AM

Amen