Sinner ( Slight Re-Write )

Sinner

They will weep eternally
And suck the marrow
Of Satan’s promise

And I in righteous vindication
Will be saved

Or so I thought

Until I saw in a dream
A lucid pertaining
Of innocence
Accused and cursed by the guilty

My brother
My sister
Fallen

And there as they fell
Went with them
Jesus Christ

The Savior He fell

There to weep in eternal sorrow
And suck the marrow
Of Satan’s promise

He fell

He fell
With the sinners
When judgment was over
He fell
To be there
With his brothers
With his sisters
He fell
To be there
With them

Such a love
No man
Or woman
Has ever 
Known

Without compromise
Without condition
With irrefutable love
The Messiah
He fell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Torres Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 2:53 PM
you play soccer does your boy its my favorite sport my cousin Fernando Torres plays on the Spanish world cup team. Very proud of him. GBU and your son your friend Michael
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December 15, 2008 at 2:51 PM
me. Then I try and forgive like God calls me to do. Someone start's something I finish it and then I get blamed for it. Life isn't fair I dont like compromising my entegrity. When I'm attacked I respond but God calls us to completely forgive its not the easiest thing to do but it brings healing. I will continue to pray for his healing as well. God bless you my English brother incidently I was a proffessional soccer player Clyde Best from England was one of my favorites and ofcourse Beckam did
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December 15, 2008 at 2:46 PM
Colin wow. You put a smile on my face. You knew you would lol. This is beyond word's can describe. Thank you so much for writing this. I alway's pray for my true friends and their children. Ofcourse you and your son, and I find myself thinking about Yvonne . I tried to reach out to people that have hurt me but they feel that staying distant is the answer. I will continue praying for them for complete healing. I know my truth's and I will stand by my convictions. I love everyone until they hurt
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