Sinking Rationality

Quicken my perception with your poetic prophecies 
Preach with persuasion, until your theories are believed                         

Mixed me in the mortar of your mental monument,
Illuminate my psyche with your divine enlightenment

Chronicle your intelligences onto my solemn scrolls
Let me read you like a mystery and watch the plot unfold 

Speak to me in riddles and watch me crack your codes
Light the fuse to my confusion and feel it explode

Brand my brain with the force of your profound conviction
Explain to me your logic, dissecting fact from fiction.

Take me to a higher level while my knowledge elevates
Deadlocked in your insight; no way to escape

Engrave your explanations into my wild imagination
Revive my unawareness with your clarifications

Submerge me in your subconscious until I fathom your meaning
Intuition knowing, growing, over flowing in your reasoning

Drown me in the seas of your possibilities
Fill me with your brilliance beyond my capacity

Manipulate my mind and reposition my thinking                   
Throw me a life preserve;  my rationality‘s sinking

Chiquita Baity

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Magnus Nwagu Amudi Esq

Date: 8/31/2011 6:49:00 AM

You are you, a great eagle soaring high the your abode the sky it piece pierce my rationality like a ritual to join a fraternity but i don't want this calamity of loosing my dear reasonability Great work, well written.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/23/2011 6:46:00 PM

This was quite a write. Have a great day! Vince

Kash Poet

Date: 8/22/2011 5:11:00 PM

An insightful write Chiquita.Liked it very much.

Steven Cooke

Date: 8/22/2011 9:03:00 AM

another superb write, a mastery of words, perfection in poetry. love it

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/22/2011 12:32:00 AM

What a glorious write flowing with so much passion and conviction, I love it....with love....old Jack

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/21/2011 10:47:00 PM

This is a rather deep poem, I enjoyed that a lot! Start to mess with my mind I get intrigued and want to figure it all out!! Great work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/21/2011 9:15:00 PM

you have strong flowed out thoughts. I got to say, this is my kind of thinking and couplets... I will recommend a poem i wrote one to you. If I may~ it's called edge walker... lol.. on my 3rd page of my poems... I do hope you give me your opinion on my poem.... I really do love this... Adding this poem and you to my favorites... have a nice one,..p.d.

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/21/2011 8:20:00 PM

at your service.

Wole Francis

Date: 8/21/2011 8:19:00 PM

beautifully written,gurl you're so good.

Judy Ball

Date: 8/21/2011 8:05:00 PM

This is relly very good. To me it sounds like you are either asking God for His enlightenment or speaking to your muse. Great job. Well thought out and expertly put together. God Bless, JB