Sinking Rationality

Quicken my perception with your poetic prophecies 
Preach with persuasion, until your theories are believed                         

Mixed me in the mortar of your mental monument,
Illuminate my psyche with your divine enlightenment

Chronicle your intelligences onto my solemn scrolls
Let me read you like a mystery and watch the plot unfold 

Speak to me in riddles and watch me crack your codes
Light the fuse to my confusion and feel it explode

Brand my brain with the force of your profound conviction
Explain to me your logic, dissecting fact from fiction.

Take me to a higher level while my knowledge elevates
Deadlocked in your insight; no way to escape

Engrave your explanations into my wild imagination
Revive my unawareness with your clarifications

Submerge me in your subconscious until I fathom your meaning
Intuition knowing, growing, over flowing in your reasoning

Drown me in the seas of your possibilities
Fill me with your brilliance beyond my capacity

Manipulate my mind and reposition my thinking                   
Throw me a life preserve;  my rationality‘s sinking

Chiquita Baity

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Nwagu Amudi Esq Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 6:49 AM
You are you, a great eagle soaring high the your abode the sky it piece pierce my rationality like a ritual to join a fraternity but i don't want this calamity of loosing my dear reasonability Great work, well written.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 6:46 PM
This was quite a write. Have a great day! Vince
Poet Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 5:11 PM
An insightful write Chiquita.Liked it very much.
Cooke Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 9:03 AM
another superb write, a mastery of words, perfection in poetry. love it
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 12:32 AM
What a glorious write flowing with so much passion and conviction, I love it....with love....old Jack
Sivey Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 10:47 PM
This is a rather deep poem, I enjoyed that a lot! Start to mess with my mind I get intrigued and want to figure it all out!! Great work!!
A   Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 9:15 PM
you have strong flowed out thoughts. I got to say, this is my kind of thinking and couplets... I will recommend a poem i wrote one to you. If I may~ it's called edge walker... lol.. on my 3rd page of my poems... I do hope you give me your opinion on my poem.... I really do love this... Adding this poem and you to my favorites... have a nice one,..p.d.
Loving Iii Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 8:20 PM
at your service.
Francis Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 8:19 PM
beautifully written,gurl you're so good.
Ball Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 8:05 PM
This is relly very good. To me it sounds like you are either asking God for His enlightenment or speaking to your muse. Great job. Well thought out and expertly put together. God Bless, JB
Akinwande Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 6:02 PM
beautiful... excellent job.
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