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Sinking

I miss you. 
I'm dying 
the slow death 
drowning in a sea 
of people I don't know 
never wanted to know 
because there's only 
ever been you
who sings to my soul
calling me back 
yet never quite 
wanting me.
I struggled 
through the crowd 
to find you 
knowing 
full well 
you don't 
want to be found
at least 
not by me.  
I feel my 
determination 
waning away
my mind 
pulled under 
by unknown voices 
my body sucked 
into an
unfamiliar crowd
I close my 
eyes  imagining 
your hand
as a Lifeboat 
pulling me to you
but you're not here
not really 
and I sink slowly 
into a loud yet 
voiceless crowd.

©Sam Harty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Farookh Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 3:45 AM
"I sink slowly into a loud yet voiceless crowd." Deeply emotional, Sam. Nice!
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