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Single Snowflake

Jan 1, 2020 her face is frozen, like a block of ice. cracks inch along the otherwise smooth surface. as words fill the air around her. each one begging her, to just FEEL something! to let a glittery sheen light her eyes and curve her lips, or allow a tear to leak and spill down her flawless skin. to tug in frustration at her ebony curls, or sigh. Be human be herself! a tremor passes thru her rigid, unmoving body and a wind pulls fiercely at her hair. like a kiss, a single snowflake dances into her curls, brushes white, and melts away. Winter Contest Emile Pinet

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Date: 1/1/2021 12:18:00 PM
Hello Poetry Lover, I sense that this poem will win the contest. So nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/2/2021 3:22:00 PM
Hello Poetry Lover, I hop that you enjoyed your day. I will read more of your poetry. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 1/1/2021 12:32:00 PM
Hi Darlene, thanks for your kind words on my poem. Have a great day, nice to meet you too!

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