David Smalling Poet Rhyme

Singing Spheres

dusk comes now
                            in dress of velvet snow
                 the last bang splintered fractals of light
            and set the universe to dance in day and night
  music made the mazed world, and spheres' songs winging flight
                surged  love muted strains in shells that blares
                            a melody and snares
                                singing spheres  










David Smalling for "Night Melody" contest, 8/23/2012

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Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2012 at 10:58 AM David, , Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's NIGHT MELODY---TROIS-par-par par-what a HUIT :-) :-) contest... I love your entry... always~ PD

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2012 at 10:22 AM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Night Melody" contest David. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song August 29, 2012 at 5:23 AM Enchanting with its personification....congrats on your win. gwendolen

Kash Poet August 28, 2012 at 1:57 PM Beautiful poem here David!Congrats on the win!

Joann Grisetti August 28, 2012 at 9:15 AM Like the fractals of light. Your snow sings to me. Congratulations.

Nette Onclaud August 28, 2012 at 6:21 AM congrats on your top win in my contest, david... a vivid, melodic tune!..:) hugggs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 28, 2012 at 6:10 AM Congratulations David, a fine winning write here xx

Lee Ramage August 28, 2012 at 5:52 AM Flows like a Beautiful song. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee