Singing Blue Blazes

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A dream faraway distant thoughts

As the snowdrops nod happily when you kissed my soul warmly love
laughing in the cold spring air so stirringly beautiful flutters wings of a dove 
 
The daffodils yawn awakening to new life or so it seems 
sun beams smile inside a thousand songs sweetly my dream

Birds singing freely dawning tunes deep heartfelt desire  
you are amazing one faraway flame kissing beats on fire

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/25/2015 1:39:00 AM

G'day Liam... all positive and breathes out warmth and colour. A fine love poem. Thank you - Lindsay

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/5/2015 6:44:00 AM

An outstanding beauty!To my fvs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2015 12:06:00 PM

- A poem that must have flown quickly away ..... - But, glad that it knocked on my door today - Beautiful as always, my friend Liam !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/1/2015 9:29:00 AM

I've missed you, Liam. I hope all is well. It seems the passion is still alive in your heart. Sending you hugs, My friend. This is a beautiful piece.

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/28/2015 9:13:00 PM

With words that sweetly rhyme, I'm sure your faraway flame will continue to blaze till your hearts come together once again in wild embrace! 7 ! PS. Had my Lyric's debut yesterday, sad that you weren't there.Sending you and yours smiles from the isles. :D Kim

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/28/2015 5:09:00 PM

Hi Liam! Such a very beautiful love poem penned by you my dearest friend.Just dazzling!Another diamond from your pen!A huge 7 +++from me!!A very romantic passionate love poem to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling.I enjoyed it! Awesome piece.Truly a mighty golden pen!To me you're always the best Liam!So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet!I wish you the best in everything!In his light!God bless you always!Wishing you a very lovely weekend Liam!:)Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^"