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Sing Electric Wine

Phantoms pass us by as we sip electric wine Clown - like faces stand out in the darkness Eyes turn inward to see the joyful lava from which we were made Don't worry at all The stream of life is still rolling along The best we can do is to go with the flow and realize that our hearts will beat in time to the rythms generated by the cosmic clock Let joy wash over us Sing electric wine A sip wll do you good Brillant intoxication becomes the order of the day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/24/2012 10:40:00 AM
Ver cool, could be a great song. I love the title as well. You even have a unique way of placing your words on the page. The Rythm of you!
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Date: 7/11/2012 6:52:00 PM
‡ I Love That, 'Electric Wine;' Tis Original & Gathers A Few Kudos In Brilliance Itself, My Dear Sweet Matthew * Through & Through Intrigue In Contemporary Classic, Garnished Amid Inspirations * Thank You, For Your Wonderful Visit * Luv, Rachel ‡
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Date: 7/10/2012 2:42:00 PM
A sip of cool wine just might do the trick on this hot day and the charge I get must mean it is electric! This has a lovely "other world" tone to it which takes me places I'd love to go. Never heard of Heinrich Heine, will try to find but I take that as a compliment and thank you! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 7/9/2012 9:30:00 PM
there was some Bradbury story I Sing the Body Electric, something like that? this made me think of that tale. this is wonderful.
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Date: 7/9/2012 7:12:00 PM
Sometimes all we have is our best.
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Date: 7/9/2012 5:46:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your excellent work this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Going against the flow is the hardest and maybe the best route..It is according to where the flow is headed _heaven or_hell..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment on my work..Sara
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