Andrea Dietrich Poet Triolet

Sing a Song of Christmas - the Six Senses - Part 3

The Pies Are in the Oven (Smell)

The pies are in the oven. Oh!
Aroma greets my family,
Who rush downstairs with eyes aglow!
The pies are in the oven. Oh!
And Christmas cheer is sure to grow
When home smells like a bakery.
The pies are in the oven. Oh!
Aroma greets my family!

            Joy
(The extra special sense)

What night of wonder most profound
When Mary bore her baby boy.
Celestial light! Angelic sound!
What night of wonder most profound.
And shepherds who were gathered round
God’s precious lamb were filled with joy.
What night of wonder most profound
When Mary bore her baby boy.


For PD's any Christmas Poem old/new Poetry Contest

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Maurice Yvonne November 1, 2014 at 10:56 AM And that concludes the trio of duo triolets. A standing O. Really loved all six.

Phyllis Babcock February 2, 2014 at 9:04 PM Likes this series of poems about Christmas. You describe it so well but I am glad a new year has arrived. love phyl

Joseph May January 5, 2014 at 2:20 PM were five and twenty blackbirds baked in the pie? ,,lol...congrats on a fine win Andrea... Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2014 at 6:40 PM this is exactly what I was going for, that old nursery rhyme!!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole January 5, 2014 at 2:37 AM Loving the reread... Congrats on your fine win the contest and compliments of the season to you and yours.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 4, 2014 at 11:16 PM Enjoyed the write on the Christmas and congrats on the win, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A January 4, 2014 at 9:25 PM Hi Andrea, .. Thank you for the lovely poem. Congratulations, and thank you for supporting my contest... Always & forever <3<3<3 LINDA

Daver Austin December 30, 2013 at 11:41 AM Thanks for bringing back the sense of Christmas that seems to happen only for children. I suppose becoming childlike is part of old age, eh? Love, Old daver

Charmaine Chircop December 28, 2013 at 5:51 AM I really an enjoying these lovely lyrics and the delicious yummies : )

Poet Destroyer A December 27, 2013 at 7:03 PM Ooo, thanks for reminding me of this contest.... see you in a bit.. Linda

Erich Goller December 26, 2013 at 5:37 PM A beautiful and happy Christmas story poem Andrea,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Joseph May December 26, 2013 at 10:10 AM nicely penned Andrea...best wishes

John Loving Iii December 25, 2013 at 6:58 PM What a creative entry. Merry Christmas.

Eileen Manassian December 25, 2013 at 5:14 PM Again......you simply enthrall with your words, Andrea.........Beautiful in every SENSE of the word! Hugs!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole December 25, 2013 at 6:59 AM An interesting poem you've penned for the season. Good luck in Pd's contest. Merry Christmas to you and yours!

Russell Sivey December 25, 2013 at 6:42 AM I see you have displayed the reason for the season, a very spectacular write too my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this morning! What a fantastic piece, quite the wondrous poem! Awesome Work!!

Carl Fraser December 25, 2013 at 6:29 AM Hi Andrea, ive read all three pieces and you touched on all the sense very well and related them to the season perfectly and i especially like the extra sense joy, the reason for the season.excellent delivery and poetry,Merry Christmas, Carl

Sara Kendrick December 25, 2013 at 6:29 AM You have lyrical talent..Great work..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that you received the card..Sara

Vincent Flannery December 25, 2013 at 6:00 AM Very nice piece Andrea. Perfect reminder for this special day. Hope your Christmas is just as special.

Richard D Seal December 25, 2013 at 5:46 AM Joy eh, like I was gonna see that coming lol, then again very fitting. Dunno why but I keep getting this idea you're pop group, Andrea and the Triolets haha. Hope you're having a wonderful day. Take care, Richard

Matthew Anish December 25, 2013 at 5:15 AM Hope your holiday is joyous - you seem to love it it this poem. I did see sites like that on my trip to Israel - I would recommend such a trip to anyone - of whatever faith. Peace & Love Matthew Anish