Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Cinqku

Sinful Bleed-Ing Disorder

Sinful
                                            minds bleeding-
                                             profusely. Seek
                                          a hysteroscope from
                                                   Above.




Pace, G
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0510-2012

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Just That Archaic Poet August 21, 2013 at 2:22 PM I've said it before, and I'll say it again: I love love love brevity and how so much can be said with so few words. I am unaccustomed to this style, but I like it. Very interesting. Thanks for a great read! :)

Doreen Wright August 5, 2012 at 8:54 PM Minds bleeding profusely? Wow! So much said in so few words. Powerful!!

Bertha Davis July 26, 2012 at 9:57 AM Thanks for sharing and encouraging

Carma Sanderson June 1, 2012 at 11:29 PM So very true This one is. ;B Pace Ink-U-Script June 2, 2012 at 12:24 AM Yes maam indeed it is!!

Peggy Caulfield May 24, 2012 at 6:54 AM This one is interesting - a hysteroscope from above. You are passing some good ideas on. Pace Ink-U-Script May 24, 2012 at 9:09 AM Lol..I tried to be a bit different!!! All smiles

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2012 at 9:35 PM oh this is cool today. How did I miss it before? Pace Ink-U-Script May 15, 2012 at 10:52 PM Lol...I'm not even sure!! Hugs

Joi Murphy May 15, 2012 at 6:18 PM guidance!!!!!! I like it Pace Ink-U-Script May 15, 2012 at 6:28 PM Thank you!!

Sara Kendrick May 12, 2012 at 8:51 AM Interesting way of putting the idea..Yes, when one is encrusted with sin that one needs to meet the Savior..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara Pace Ink-U-Script May 12, 2012 at 9:23 AM Thank you and you are so very welcome madam!!

Cindy Lu May 12, 2012 at 7:27 AM You have done so well here! I remember the first poetry I read of yours, a definite favorite. Rock on with you bad arse pen! Cindy Lu AKA Lucinda Pace Ink-U-Script May 12, 2012 at 9:22 AM Thanks you sooo much!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2012 at 5:56 AM New man in P-Soup - Tell him that I like this haiku, and he is welcome to read some of mine poem Pace,G - Love Anne-Lise :)+ :=) Pace Ink-U-Script May 12, 2012 at 6:18 AM Lol..ok I will...Thanks Anne!!

Michael J. Falotico May 12, 2012 at 5:47 AM Very nice G... such wisdom in your words. very enjoyed.... Michael Pace Ink-U-Script May 12, 2012 at 6:19 AM Thank you sir!!!

John Rhinem May 12, 2012 at 12:32 AM Smile ˜ Quite Compelling & Yet Injected With A Bit Of Humour Also, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful GPac * Made Me Think Of Jack Nicholson In One Flew Over The Cookoos Nest ˜ Also, Thank You For The Kind Visit; Very Lovely ˜ My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜ Pace Ink-U-Script May 12, 2012 at 2:20 AM Simply love your comments John!!! Smiles

Joseph May May 11, 2012 at 11:20 AM ouch...nicely done G... Pace Ink-U-Script May 11, 2012 at 12:14 PM Thanks Joseph!!

Deborah Burch May 10, 2012 at 2:55 PM Bravo! It isn't a tournequet that's needed to stop it...no quick fix...complete removal of the problem!! And by the only one who can fix it! Well Done!! Pace! Well Done...big hugs, love ya deb Pace Ink-U-Script May 11, 2012 at 12:14 PM Smiles..Thank you Deborah!

Kash Poet May 10, 2012 at 10:59 AM Good one Pace,enjoyed. Pace Ink-U-Script May 10, 2012 at 11:10 AM Thank you Kash!!!

David Williams May 10, 2012 at 10:22 AM Pace I like it ..David Pace Ink-U-Script May 10, 2012 at 11:10 AM Thank you David!!