Sinful Beauty

Listen well to my skipped heart beat.
They asked why your words are so sweet, 
moaning as they burn up the heat.
Your smiles I can forever look
for you, we guys have to compete
and our souls you have hooked.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 5:14 AM
hi celine...could i ask a favor?.. kindly comment on my latest poem called " chapter seven.".. i'm getting sytem errors for hours and would just want to know if there is a server problem here.. thanks loads!.. i can't reply to others as well:) huggs, nette
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July 13, 2011 at 12:35 PM
sweet, romantic musing, celine... wonderful work here! :) huggs, nette
Carlson Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 11:31 PM
This poem has something about it... I don't know what it is...but it's something good - Kyle
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