Sinful

SINFUL we like spaghetti think pope his mouth, gown red stained we say hail marys

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/11/2014 7:55:00 PM

I was expecting chocholate but spaghetti will do.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2014 1:50:00 AM

Hi, Daver. Thanks for stopping by to visit me again yesterday!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 4/1/2014 4:08:00 PM

I like spaghetti...yum! This sauce has meatballs.:) I'm not a religous fanatic, I don't have pasta coiled about my entire being, like a mummy, but I do have it wrapped around my heart and head. Keep well..Love, Mikki

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/1/2014 12:32:00 PM

Daver, for a second, I thought I was going to read pages from my diary on here.... LOL... Kidding... I love how you twirl this around a fork... Like Spaghetti... Interesting scenario... Linda

Kira Price

Date: 3/31/2014 11:05:00 PM

Yes very interesting image there. nice

Michael Dom

Date: 3/31/2014 2:43:00 AM

a thoroughly decedent sauce deserves grace.

Michael Dom
Date: 3/31/2014 2:44:00 AM

decadent rather...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2014 11:41:00 AM

wow, what an image, Daver. so has spring sprung for you yet? I can see the blooms getting ready to burst open on my trees now.