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Since You Been Gone

By the bank of a meandering stream underneath the weeping willow tree, Recall the endearing days of our dream like the wily wind, whimsical and free. Then the dark clouds rolled over our sky In the pouring rains you got swept away, The shrubs and the bushes knew not why where and in whose arms you quietly lay. Scouring the skies with the footloose moon, Deep in the woods, across shimmering sea, Oh, my forlorn heart vows to find you soon lest falling prey to cruel time you forget me. Waiting by the stream your name I often call wailing underneath this weeping willow tree all seasons, winter, spring, summer and fall, From this dire fate do come and set me free. "You broke my heart" Nicola Byme contest

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Date: 2/17/2017 12:02:00 PM
Great poem Abdul, nice to see this high on the winners list, very very nice word selection!
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Date: 2/18/2017 5:59:00 PM
Thanks John...very very nice comment!
Date: 2/15/2017 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this absolutely wonderful poem! That imagery is insane.
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Date: 2/18/2017 6:00:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Darren.
Date: 2/15/2017 2:21:00 AM
Well done Abdul! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/18/2017 6:01:00 PM
Thanks for your 'just' comment, James.
Date: 2/14/2017 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations Abdul!! Well done!!:) hugs deb
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Date: 2/18/2017 6:02:00 PM
Hugs back to you Deb. Thanks
Date: 2/14/2017 10:58:00 AM
Well done Abdul, congratulations deserved...
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/18/2017 6:03:00 PM
Thanks Charlie.
Date: 2/14/2017 5:22:00 AM
"Then the dark clouds rolled over our sky" - great line. Heart broken through all the seasons. Congrats on your top win, Abdul!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/18/2017 6:02:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 2/14/2017 1:54:00 AM
Congratulations on you win. Broken hearts can be mended. Kai
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Date: 2/13/2017 5:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Abdul.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/18/2017 6:04:00 PM
Thanks Agnes.
Date: 2/13/2017 4:42:00 PM
Father Time is the a most ferocious predator of them all. This is a wonderful poem and the third stanza was presented exceptionally well. Congrats on your placement
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/18/2017 5:57:00 PM
Thanks Phillip, appreciate your comment.

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