Since We Parted

Wind sweeps the clouds leaving scorching rays. 
The sun blazes, hides his face; the star winks away 
his age. But the moon, in regal float, bares her 
bumps and crags, unruffled by sun's piercing glare. 

Over half a century since we met; over four decades 
when we parted, the wind of joy and frown  
has grated on faces—our once youthful asset— 
furrowed contours on the once plane land. 

I never thought time trailed us all through
till I squinted at a face, your post on Facebook.
With dimming eyes, I searched for traces
of green years, found lines and graceful gray.

How I wish time revealed his stake in my youth! 
I would have fought, be a diamond through to dusk, 
a setting sun at the border beaming golden rays. 
My shock! Time etched first line the day I was born

and threw my life in entropic flux. Then death!  
Oh, it works behind the scene—bold, assaulting—
connives with time, wears down what's dear in me. 
Time! Oh time! A friend or foe! 


© 2016 By Celestine S. Ikwuamaesi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/13/2016 10:38:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Your words and metaphors paint a beautiful and vivid picture. Thank you so much for sharing this raw and touching piece.
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Celestine Ikwuamaesi
Date: 8/13/2016 12:53:00 PM
Lovely! Thanks, Alex for the cheering comment.
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