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Sin Weighs Me Down

SIN WEIGHS ME DOWN restrained by my knees my God pulls out all the weeds brings me to my feet Kim Rodrigues © 6/4/2017 Senryu Form

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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 6/8/2017 10:19:00 AM
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Sweet truthful poem, Kim. A most luscious Senryu offering. Nothing's better than dusting off the knees w/a clean spirit. Love your work as always. Love and hugs aplenty.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2017 10:21:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Freddie!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/7/2017 12:53:00 AM
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Mea culpa While the sins of others may give pain with which I'm fraught They don't cause me unceasing distress that lingers within It's those things that I did but should not have, or didn't but ought That nag me in the wee small hours and stay under my skin
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2017 6:10:00 AM
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So true. And so we must forgive ourselves as well and go and sin no more. Thanks, Geoffrey!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/5/2017 5:13:00 AM
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Beautiful Kim! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2017 5:48:00 AM
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Thank you, Connie!
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/4/2017 11:44:00 PM
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Another great inspirational write, Kim ~*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2017 5:48:00 AM
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Thank you, Eve!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/4/2017 9:29:00 PM
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I liked how you did this!!! :) Love lifts you right back up!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2017 9:38:00 PM
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Thank you, Arthur :) Blessings

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