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Sin Weighs Me Down

SIN WEIGHS ME DOWN

                      restrained by my knees
     my God pulls out all the weeds
brings me to my feet

Kim Rodrigues © 6/4/2017
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Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 6/8/2017 10:19:00 AM Sweet truthful poem, Kim. A most luscious Senryu offering. Nothing's better than dusting off the knees w/a clean spirit. Love your work as always. Love and hugs aplenty. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/8/2017 10:21:00 AM Thanks so much, Freddie!

Geoffrey Brewer Date: 6/7/2017 12:53:00 AM Mea culpa While the sins of others may give pain with which I'm fraught They don't cause me unceasing distress that lingers within It's those things that I did but should not have, or didn't but ought That nag me in the wee small hours and stay under my skin Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/7/2017 6:10:00 AM So true. And so we must forgive ourselves as well and go and sin no more. Thanks, Geoffrey!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/5/2017 5:13:00 AM Beautiful Kim! : ) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/5/2017 5:48:00 AM Thank you, Connie!

Eve Roper Date: 6/4/2017 11:44:00 PM Another great inspirational write, Kim ~* Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/5/2017 5:48:00 AM Thank you, Eve!

Arthur Vaso Date: 6/4/2017 9:29:00 PM I liked how you did this!!! :) Love lifts you right back up! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/4/2017 9:38:00 PM Thank you, Arthur :) Blessings