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Sara Kendrick's Simplicity Contest...Sedoka: syllable pattern of 5/7/7/5/7/7

Simplicity -- SK


lounging on the bench 
mild drizzle envelopes me-
 a scent minty as citrus

its tap releases
simple rush of soft patter ... 
waking joy from autumn pale

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2026

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Andrea Dietrich

May 26, 2026 at 1:55 PM

I knew this should place high. Big congrats, dearie

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 26, 2026 at 11:49 AM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Nette :) - hugs

May 26, 2026 at 7:36 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Sara K.

May 26, 2026 at 6:00 AM

…a scent minty as citrus. Big congrats on top placement!

May 23, 2026 at 8:39 PM

this is very beautiful, Nette

Andrea Dietrich

May 21, 2026 at 10:25 PM

This is genius, Nette I was thinking of using a similar type short form. A fave for this one

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