JC Brul Poet Rhyme

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Long arrays of cherry blossoms
promenading in the daylight,
glistening in fuchsia and white
like glimpse of celestial bosoms.
   
And to where I stand they march on 
showering petals on my palms; 
Like drizzling raindrops giving  alms
towards the thirsty arid morn.

I wish I could sustain the time
For when I pass this path again
Won't ever find them until then,
Until another spring sublime.

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Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2026 at 2:16 PM This is so pretty, my friend. Congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen May 26, 2026 at 11:46 AM - Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, JCB :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick May 26, 2026 at 8:02 AM Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Sara K.

Sotto Poet May 26, 2026 at 5:48 AM Beautiful imagery in your poem... cherry blossom trees are my favorite, despite their transience. Congrats on your win

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 2, 2020 at 6:58 AM I can picture "long arrays of Cherry Blossoms" - I love them, and feel sad like you -"Won't ever find them until then, Until another spring sublime." Feelings of a true poetic heart expressed with enchanting words! Love, Mala

Silent One June 21, 2020 at 6:29 AM I love cherry blossom trees, even though they are so temporary... lovely imagery in your poem...

Aditi Mishra June 17, 2020 at 6:33 AM I love walking around cherry blossoms. It gives me a soothing and mystical essence of nature. Beautiful words :)

Richard Lamoureux June 14, 2020 at 6:12 PM Such a gorgeous piece. ;0)

Tom Cunningham June 14, 2020 at 1:22 PM Beautiful spring image you've painted with your words. The cherry blossom is awesome. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis June 14, 2020 at 1:10 PM Uplifting! An ornament of spring poetry dear, Gina! Blessings

Regina Mcintosh June 14, 2020 at 11:52 AM Lovely, dear friend. I very much enjoyed your words. God bless you with love, Gina

Vijay Pandit June 14, 2020 at 11:46 AM Loved the happy tone of your poem, JCB--excellent imagery you created in rhythms of nature. Superb ending stanza. A FAVE for me!

Arturo Michael June 14, 2020 at 11:32 AM Most time you only get to see it once...so love it when you have it...Nice write of cherry bosoms