Simplicity

Dancing in rythmn
keeping in tune with my heart
great simplicity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 5, 2010 at 11:30 AM
It sounds like we could have a magical friendship that is if you would like it too!!! read Our Friendship!!!
Kendrick Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 11:12 AM
Interesting write in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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March 31, 2010 at 11:07 AM
Checking out them haikus. this is Cool. I just did my first one.
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March 31, 2010 at 10:42 AM
(: this is really pretty. and you did a great job on it. i suck with haikus but this is really nice ^^
Montgomery Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 10:35 AM
I really enjoyed this poem. Nice choice of words :)
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March 22, 2010 at 12:56 AM
Good job and really good poem keep up the work
Taylor Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Short and sweet - to the point.
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March 12, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Enjoyed it. Sometimes simplicity is where the read joy lies. Nice uplifing view. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
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March 12, 2010 at 11:07 AM
That's the only way to live happily -- "in tune with (your) heart." I enjoyed this very much. So uplifting! Best Wishes, Carolyn
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March 12, 2010 at 9:45 AM
Very short, very simple, very deep, very much loved!!Great Poem<3 Emily
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