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Simplicity

a feather floating aloft on a zephyr twirling beneath the hues of morning's rise captivates suddenly i wish it were me carefree

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2019 4:18:00 PM

Yes, this is 'Simplicity' --- only in the profoundest sense of that word. You have captured a feeling (familiar to me) so, so well. A FAVE right away. Bravo. Cheers, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/10/2019 5:22:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend...i am honored that you thought so highly of this one...it's amazing what these winds and cooler temps can stir within a muse or mind... :) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/7/2019 10:22:00 AM

Lovely, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/7/2019 10:32:00 AM

Thank you Line... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/7/2019 10:16:00 AM

I think we all would wish the same thing my friend. Your poem captures the innocence and the beauty of nature and how it touches us. Wonderfully written Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/7/2019 10:32:00 AM

thank you my friend...if only... hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/7/2019 9:47:00 AM

Delightful --on the wings of winds--splendid imagery, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/7/2019 9:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay...sometimes the simple things in life are the most beautiful... hugs :)