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Simplicity

a feather
floating
aloft
on a zephyr
twirling
beneath the hues
of morning's rise
captivates
suddenly
i wish 
it were me
carefree

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Gershon Wolf

November 10, 2019 at 4:18 PM

Yes, this is 'Simplicity' --- only in the profoundest sense of that word. You have captured a feeling (familiar to me) so, so well. A FAVE right away. Bravo. Cheers, Gershon

Sandra Adams

November 10, 2019 at 5:22 PM

Thank you so much my friend...i am honored that you thought so highly of this one...it's amazing what these winds and cooler temps can stir within a muse or mind... :) hugs

Line Gauthier

November 7, 2019 at 10:22 AM

Lovely, Sandra.

Sandra Adams

November 7, 2019 at 10:32 AM

Thank you Line... hugs

Chris Green

November 7, 2019 at 10:16 AM

I think we all would wish the same thing my friend. Your poem captures the innocence and the beauty of nature and how it touches us. Wonderfully written Sandy.

Sandra Adams

November 7, 2019 at 10:32 AM

thank you my friend...if only... hugs