Simple Rainfall

I’m a radiant river’s lack of flowing ecstasy 
and all
I’m a serene sky’s lack of cloudy, 
unbearable rainfall
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August 6, 2022 at 6:01 AM
Love your word play here, JW: Keep writing and thanks for stopping by my page yesterday. Blessings, SuZ
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