Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

Simple Pleasures Worth Sharing

In a busy world I don't take for granted simple pleasures
like snuggling with a loved one on a chilly winter's night
Saving keepsakes of the things I collect and call treasures.
Finding myself in the dark until someone turns on a light.

I'm pleased that my children still come to me for advice
Happy with the blooms, from bulbs I planted last year.
It's wonderful when a dear friend does something nice...
like seeing me crying, then gently wipes away my tear.

Sugary kisses from my grandchild placed on my cheek
as sweet as the bite of a warm cinnamon bun with icing
Soft rain like mist is a gift from Mother Nature that I seek
and hoping to fall in love makes romance sound enticing.

Before rising in the morning I enjoy a long languid stretch
Being the giver instead of the one who takes in greed
Liking the end results of charcoal portraits that I sketch
Having a stranger return my smile is a pleasure, indeed.

Being gifted with a bouquet of flowers for no reason at all
Having a thirteenth doughnut thrown in for good measure
Being able to stand and walk after taking an emotional fall
Building faith in God overflows my heart with pure pleasure.

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Sam Scott October 13, 2023 at 3:28 PM So important to be grateful for the seemingly small things, that are actually the big things. Stand-out was "Being able to stand and walk after taking an emotional fall".. lovely sentiments, Lin ;)

Mystic Rose Rose October 11, 2023 at 1:25 AM I so needed to read this at 4 am, thanks for reminding me of all the good things in life Lin, xo Lin Lane October 11, 2023 at 1:27 AM Morning, Vie. Thanks for liking my thoughts. We all need reminders from time to time.

Jerry Brotherton October 10, 2023 at 8:00 PM This is such a wonderful poem, Lin. The simple pleasures are the best. We don't need money and fame. Although, I would not turn down that 1.7 billion dollar lottery if they wanted to send it my way. Lin Lane October 10, 2023 at 8:07 PM Thanks, Jerry. I can’t call you foolish to accept the 1.7 billion. I appreciate your kind thoughts.

David Kavanagh October 10, 2023 at 3:33 PM Simple pleasures come in small treasures like putting this wonderful poem together, A reminder to us all, be happy with what we have, and live in the moment, cheers David Lin Lane October 10, 2023 at 3:57 PM Hi David, and they certainly do come in small treasures. I am so pleased that you found my poem to your liking. Your follow up in comments is exactly how I feel... how we should all feel about what we have and not be concerned about our wants if our needs are met. Thanks.

Jan Allison October 10, 2023 at 1:13 PM oh wow Lin this is so beautiful and uplifting a divine rhyme and I love every line especially the sugary kisses from your gorgeous grandchild I can just picture it so vividly in my head:-) a joy to read this dark autumnal night , your 'simple pleasures' are like a ray of sunshine:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane October 10, 2023 at 3:52 PM There's a need for uplifting poetry lately. I'm tired of all the negative finger pointing and accusations. Thanks, Jan... hopefully, this too shall come to pass.

Mark Koplin October 10, 2023 at 1:13 PM Absolutely beautiful Lin!! Lin Lane October 10, 2023 at 3:40 PM Thank you so very much, Mark.

Victor Buhagiar October 10, 2023 at 11:06 AM Little things mean a lot and in reality, these little things are great things. A poem written from the heart. Always to be appreciated. Blessings. Lin Lane October 10, 2023 at 11:29 AM I'm also grateful for poets who enjoy my poetry. Thank you, Victor.

Tania Kitchin October 10, 2023 at 9:52 AM Lin, a great sweet and uplifting poem, hugs. Lin Lane October 10, 2023 at 10:08 AM Thank you, Tania. Positive writes are always a pleasure to post instead of words to ward off negativity from others. Hugs to you.

Kim Rodrigues October 10, 2023 at 9:47 AM Lots of blessings! Sugary kisses from my grandchild placed on my cheek as sweet as the bite of a warm cinnamon bun with icing… Lin Lane October 10, 2023 at 10:06 AM I have many to be grateful for. Thanks a lot, Kim.