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Simple Life Song

Theres a dim in the light which I see. Which may put a dent between you and me. I don't know where to go or what to do. I am loss, with out you. My life is held together by simple frame. To lose you would be a total shame. Appreciation is the key, to find out what is felt for you from me. Your respects while in hate. Your knowledge is the power, decides my fate. The simple song I sing. Will lack the all-important ring. If you don't come along, it won't be a simple song. To save my soul and my heart,Please, Don't Depart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/22/2016 5:32:00 PM
Ludner, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*"
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Date: 8/2/2008 8:19:00 AM
As long as that person is there you are o.k.,that sounds like true love.
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Date: 7/25/2008 6:14:00 PM
Interesting reflection. I like the title. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/9/2008 6:17:00 AM
Ludner, Welcome to PoetrySoup. I hope you will continue to write and share your excellent poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2008 9:08:00 AM
Hello Ludner welcome to poetry soup. this going to sound funny. While reading I thought about the song by James Ingram 'How Do You Keep The Music Playing'.Relationships are like a song some know what it takes and stay for the long haul; and others get tired and fade away. this poem is inspirational it's a call out for love. B BLESS Crystal
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