Simple Life Simpler

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Poetic Form: Jueju

Inspired: 2024 August 29

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Life of country boys
Rocks amd branch for toys
A car comes this way
Boy no longer play
Dirt road boy clears way
Car stops white man says
Passion fruits that is
My tutu, tutu
Car ...  man say, do you ... (breathless run)
Man say, passion fruit
Maybe, ... parachute
Out there! Li-Li-Koi?
Yes you silly boy.
Go and pick for them
They gave bubble gum.
Smiles car drives away
Country Boy at play.

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