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Poetic Form: Jueju

Inspired: 2024 August 29

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Life of country boys Rocks amd branch for toys A car comes this way Boy no longer play Dirt road boy clears way Car stops white man says Passion fruits that is My tutu, tutu Car ... man say, do you ... (breathless run) Man say, passion fruit Maybe, ... parachute Out there! Li-Li-Koi? Yes you silly boy. Go and pick for them They gave bubble gum. Smiles car drives away Country Boy at play.

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