Simple, Just Look.

Built up to be broken down
That’s really how I feel..

I can’t believe it happened now
To me it can’t be real..

Beneath this rugged barrier
Lays a longing to be loved..

Although you may not be perfect
You’re the one I’m thinking of.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 20, 2010 at 5:25 AM
thanks, teasing you, heartfelt verse hope your love appreciates your heart.
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