Simpatico

Two opaque shadows.
Are baring their souls
Enter the fever heat.
As molten lava flows.
Desire is replete.
Simpatico.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Elless Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 10:37 AM
Thank You, Pangie. This is a rewrite from eight to six lines. What a difference in the response. Sometimes less is more, It seems. Thanks for the encouraging words. As you know well they mean alot. Keep Rolling.XX
Romios Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 2:23 PM
Wow, RJ! I really like this! Very steamy, but softly poetic. I prefer amour to trees and mushrooms!! Nothing romantic about hgetting it on with a tree! LOL Pangie R.
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