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Simmering Intensity

Just a look yet a torrent of hidden emotion Just a smile yet a message of concealed affection Just a touch yet an eruption of channelled passion AP: 1st place 2022 Submitted on February 20, 2018 for contest LOVE POEM, RHYME ONLY sponsored by LAURA LOO - RANKED 2ND

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Viv Wigley

Date: 2/24/2018 1:59:00 PM

Just a fine little piece, Line, well done! Regards, Viv

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/24/2018 4:29:00 PM

Thanks, Viv. Much appreciated.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 2/24/2018 3:47:00 AM

Congratulation, Line on your win with a cute poem.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/24/2018 5:39:00 AM

Thank you, Subimal. Much appreciated.

Lu Loo

Date: 2/23/2018 10:23:00 AM

such romance and passion portrayed in your poem sweet Line, great poem, thank you and congrats :) -luloo

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/23/2018 11:44:00 AM

Thank you, Laura. Fun contest.

Kurt Philip Behm

Date: 2/21/2018 7:29:00 PM

I love the way you broke up the message. A machine gun of emotion. Well done! Kurt

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/21/2018 8:44:00 PM

Thank you, Kurt. Great description "a machine gun of emotion".

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/21/2018 4:13:00 PM

VERY creative, my friend! Perfectly framed and messaged. It's a winner in my book. Good luck in the contest! :)gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/21/2018 6:13:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/20/2018 8:27:00 PM

Wow! Line, this poem is simmered just right.. beautifully expressed and spiced with passion for an intense flavor of love! I love how it builds to the last line. An awesome and compelling poem. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2018 8:57:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 2/20/2018 6:18:00 PM

Beautiful words!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2018 8:57:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Rhoda.

Silent One

Date: 2/20/2018 4:28:00 PM

Great poem Line..

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2018 5:48:00 PM

Thanks, SO. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/20/2018 4:14:00 PM

Love the shape of the poem, adorned with beautiful words.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2018 5:48:00 PM

Thank you, Harry. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/20/2018 1:43:00 PM

- Really skilled and well done ... love it, Line :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2018 3:58:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/20/2018 12:52:00 PM

Oh, yes - a just can be filled with everything passionate conveyed in a flash with hopes of a forever catch. Got carried away at the end of that sentence. Your meaning, I get and concur, I like how you delivered intense simplicity so simply. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2018 1:06:00 PM

Thanks for your sweet visit and comment, CayCay.