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Silver Willow

The willow leaves take on a silver glow, As lunar light foretells of love tonight, That speaks without uttering worldly sound, And leaves the senses rippling to the ground, In lucent passions the soul makes its flight, Beneath the boughs of the weeping-willow. O sweet this love that quenched my seething thirst, With gentle touch and a desirous look, The smile, the warmest smile to light my fire, My love you are all I ever require, You are every chapter in the book, In these moments my heart is set to burst. My senses dance as my heart does back flips When loving words echo upon your lips. Form: Schupan's Sonnet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/2/2012 6:35:00 AM
A passionate love poem! Neatly rhymed with wonderful phrasing and imagery. Well done, Jemmy!! Best wishes, Keith
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 5/2/2012 6:36:00 AM
Thank you Keith
Date: 4/28/2012 5:28:00 PM
a lovely romantic piece, enjoyed, jag
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 5/2/2012 6:30:00 AM
Thank you Jag
Date: 4/28/2012 5:09:00 PM
Smile ˜ I do not know if I mentioned this unto your lovely beauty or another a few ago but, there is this beautiful girl I have long loved now amid this bit of a slight complexed moment ˜ O how I love to kisss her beautiful lips; her beautiful heart * I need to get her beauty to a wedding ˜ But as she knows, how much I love her beauty; just as your beautiful self amid this treasurous heartful verse ˜ I love Your beautiful poetry ˜ My love, Forever, John!:) ˜
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 5/2/2012 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, I wish you luck in winning your lady and much happiness
Date: 4/28/2012 4:16:00 PM
Swoon worthy! Best regards Brenda
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 5/2/2012 6:34:00 AM
Thank you Brenda

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