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Silver Moonbeams

silver moonbeams—
skinny dipping in
summer heat


*For my friends Down Under enjoying summer

This haiku was written in 2005

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Paul Callus

April 16, 2017 at 1:45 PM

I like the image which you present in this delightful haiku, Connie. Incidentally I also wrote a 'skinny dipping' haiku last year! #7 Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

April 16, 2017 at 2:07 PM

Thank you Paul. Another poet won an award with my poem. Can't do anything about it....but wish they had not plagiarized. They slightly changed one word. These things happen. Cheers, Connie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 27, 2010 at 8:57 PM

very nice haiku, Connie--I really like the contrast of your first and last lines :) & no prob with the typo in my name :) keep writing and thanks for your comments :)

James Fraser

January 21, 2010 at 3:34 PM

Roll on the warm months, nice summery Haiku Connie >> James

Andrea Dietrich

January 20, 2010 at 12:39 PM

Very descriptive, very cute, connie!!

Carolyn Devonshire

January 16, 2010 at 7:14 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Connie! This is a lovely image and also quite welcome now in the midst of winter. Excellent use of alliteration in the first word of each line. Love, Carolyn