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Silver Moonbeams

silver moonbeams— skinny dipping in summer heat *For my friends Down Under enjoying summer This haiku was written in 2005

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/16/2017 1:45:00 PM

I like the image which you present in this delightful haiku, Connie. Incidentally I also wrote a 'skinny dipping' haiku last year! #7 Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/16/2017 2:07:00 PM

Thank you Paul. Another poet won an award with my poem. Can't do anything about it....but wish they had not plagiarized. They slightly changed one word. These things happen. Cheers, Connie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/27/2010 8:57:00 PM

very nice haiku, Connie--I really like the contrast of your first and last lines :) & no prob with the typo in my name :) keep writing and thanks for your comments :)

James Fraser

Date: 1/21/2010 3:34:00 PM

Roll on the warm months, nice summery Haiku Connie >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2010 12:39:00 PM

Very descriptive, very cute, connie!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2010 7:14:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Connie! This is a lovely image and also quite welcome now in the midst of winter. Excellent use of alliteration in the first word of each line. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/14/2010 3:29:00 PM

Oh! for the reminder of summer and the moonbeams shining down. Great Haiku. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara