Silver Moon

SILVER Moon
           
                                     (Look, Sound, Smells, Taste, and Feels)

SILVER-Silvery-shiny is the beauty of thy WHITE face, as like as a piece of hand    kneaded morning bread
SILVER- Sounding crisply we crash that hand-flattened bread while we chew beholding that
SILVER-Turning BROWN when the horse rears home before you arise on the sky spreading the west- sandy smell
SILVER-Yummy is the final reaction after eating that GOLDEN crust of bread alike you, then it cast its spell
SILVER-We feel like listening the story of the GREY Gammer spinning wheels in moon while staring at you when shine full bright.
                         (Silver, see, white, black, sapphire, orange, puzzle, grey, feel, warm, sing, smell, aroma, eyes, hear)
Oh! Thou silvery moon, the crown of nature, the sky,
How can you uphold thy decaying circle till the fortnight?
We see the white carpet surrounding thy antique abode,
Reminding us of thy black, cloudy old moon exterior.
In the sapphire sky, before the orange sun intends to go sea bed,
You appear before then puzzling us with your splendid charm instead.
The glorious grey spots inside thee,
Illustrates a deep, romantic melancholy.
As we imagine, are those really spots on your cheek?
Are they really the holes, who are such cruel that dug so brutally thou?
Or, were they the suitors who sacrificed the lives to marry thou?
When you shine, oh silvery moon, we feel the warmth of thy soft light,
Each mind sings romantically, the flowers blossom, glow worms fly;
We hear romantic songs, waiting for the beloved, the lover plays flute, an unknown forlorn,
We smell the aroma of Jui waving in the air, eyes stuck at you; the silvery FULL-MOON.

For the contest, Color, sponsor, Tammy Reams

Tasmina Hayat Khan
5th November 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hay Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Congrats Tasmina!
Khan Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 9:42 PM
Thanks Laura!
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November 12, 2015 at 7:04 AM
I so enjoyed this winning piece!
Khan Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 8:58 AM
Thanks Richard!
Negron Flores Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:41 PM
Congratulations Tasmina.
Khan Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 9:22 PM
Thanks Nayda...
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November 11, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Great choice of color..((()))..Wonderful win..congrats....Sara
Khan Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 9:23 PM
Thanks Sara...
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November 11, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Tasmina, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Khan Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:48 AM
Thanks SKAT! Really, it was beyond my expectation!!
Reams Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:38 AM
Congrats on your win Tasmina! I loved the way you have all the colors and senses in this write. Thank you for entering into my contest that was difficult.
Khan Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:34 AM
Thanks a lot Tammy! It was beyond my expectation!!
Juman Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 6:02 PM
Marvelous my dear I wish I can write lengthy too. Please do check mines and tell me what you think
Khan Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 12:43 AM
Thanks Zaladin for encouraging me! I went through yours one, that's cool too!
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