Silver Linings

In every silver lining I find
Dark clouds hiding inside.
In the mist I stumble blind
In sheets of rain I try to hide.

I climb over rocks that bear your name
Finding my way over boulders of time.
Memories of you a searing, burning flame
I Alice through the looking glass sublime.

In fuzzy delusions I find the peace
You and I, chimes in the moving air.
Carpe Diem, the day we will seize
If sanity is lost, I really do not care.

For the flames are burning high
Burning is the longing within.
I look at silver linings with a sigh
Knowing dark clouds will always win.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 2/1/2012 6:13:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Heidie. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:33:00 PM
I've returned to read this again. In addition to my earlier comments, I'm impressed with the poetic inversion...dark clouds hiding inside a silver lining! Some dark humor here, I think! Love and best wishes, Robert.
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Date: 5/25/2011 5:05:00 AM
An inventive write, with a bitter-sweet feel to it. Some good images and expressions. Well done. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 5/30/2010 4:09:00 PM
Good usse of rhyme and imagery to share your thoughts. Hopefully, those dark clouds aren't always winning for you. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Have a good rest of the weekend. Karen
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Date: 6/18/2009 6:17:00 PM
~And Mrs. Poe, could not ever even hope to hold a candle unto "Your Excellent Splendors Dear Heidie Buys!!!":):)~This entire poem is laced with so much longing and love, "From Your Beautiful Heart!!!":):)~Again, "Astonishingly Profound Write"~"My Love & Warmth Forever & Always, To 'You & Your Loves,' Eternally, John!!!"~"Have A Beautiful Evening, Priceless Heidie Buys!!!":):) Smile, Bye ~
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Date: 6/18/2009 6:12:00 PM
"Carpe Diem, the day we will seize. If sanity is lost, I really do not care."~Well Mrs. Poe--I was just thinking as I was submitting the first comment unto "You," what a joy it truly is, to view "Your Amazing Words" again!!!:):)~And as I said to recently, of how much "You" truly have "Always" meant to me; since the very first time that I ever saw "Your Treasureful Soul!!!":):)....Cont....
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Date: 6/18/2009 5:59:00 PM
"I Alice through the looking glass sublime."~Smile, "Classic Verse, 'Precious, Priceless, Gifted & Beautiful Heidie Buys!!!":):)~This entire poem is so soulfully profound--Reminding myself once more, of how absolutely wonderful and magnificent of a writer that "You Truly Are!!!":):)~I hope that "You" are doing so beautifully today, "Beautiful Heidie Buys!!!?":):)....Cont....
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Date: 9/5/2008 9:04:00 AM
This is excellent. I like the rhyming pattern. The flow is wonderful. Your optimism is right on point. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 8/9/2008 5:17:00 PM
a good read from first word to the last, it flowed real well, enjoyed reading it.
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