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Silver Lining

From a nebulous black portentous mass Like layers of charcoal brushed on the sky Billowing towers in all shades of white Rise up like demons nearly five miles high Suffocating the majestic mountains And brooding over the boiling grey sea Speaking with forked tongue and a warning voice About the rain of fury we’ll soon see Oppressive air foretells of your coming You have no stealth with your bickering Synapses trigger within your dull head You have no stealth with your flickering Then comes the hard rain nourishing the earth Nature’s breast feeding all of nature’s birth ~ (Modern sonnet)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/9/2012 11:49:00 AM
Hi Nigel, please label which type of the 3 sonnets forms this is at the bottom. I was wondering you used alot of enjambment in this did you do it on purpose? What have you read, heard etc about enjambment in sonnets? Light & Love
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Date: 11/11/2008 4:32:00 PM
Wonderful nature write Nigel. You were miss my friend.
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Date: 11/9/2008 4:03:00 AM
YAY, nature! I love anything that exhaults natures wonders, lovely! Love Kristin
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Date: 11/8/2008 4:22:00 PM
I agree with Rhoda--the last two lines are amazing. The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a dramatic way. Sonnets aren't easy to write. This is a good one! Thank you for sharing it and for your kind words regarding my poetry. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/8/2008 12:38:00 PM
I love the wording and the metaphors that make this write come alive, great poet you are, thanks for your comments, take care D-ncye
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Date: 11/8/2008 12:28:00 PM
an amazing title for an amazingly written sonnet,,, with the imagery and flowing lines that show true talent,,,and thank you for your words that you left behind after reading my poetry,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 11/8/2008 11:08:00 AM
Another awesome poem Nigel!! You certainly have a talent that exceeds so many, and this is a fine example. It has such a brooding quality, but ends with hope! Great job! ~ Carrie
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