Silver lake rains

The rain shall wash all sins,
Making smiles from grins.
We wallow in pain,
When we see all in vain
No thunder shall shake your beauty,
Your innocence is nothing more than purity.
Smelling your scent from miles away,
Is more than I need in a summer day 
Rain drops drumming on my skin,
After all grey skies bring joy within.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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October 3, 2025 at 5:58 AM
Lovely Thandiswa ! I love the simplicity of the rhyme scheme. Keep writing, my fellow South African Poet. I’m happy to have found you here. Remember to visit the Contest pg of this site & enter some contests to assist with expanding your poetry. With much love & light, be blessed always, Ghairo.
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