Silver Lake

SILVER LAKE
If I could read your mind, that silver lake,
where none have gone before, nor shall again,
that never ending dream you weave and make
from threads of love like love has never been;

what manner of a mortal I would be
to swim there in your lake, where you are deep,
and blessed with love as if Penelope,
is born again in you, out of a sleep

forever faithful, to someone you'd choose,
to love again, but whom you have not met,
and I would be Ulysses, yours to lose
but find again in love we can't forget.

I'd love you so, my dream and silver lake
and on your mind I'd raise the only wake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 4:41 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, VEE
Husain Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 6:40 AM
Hi! Just joined Poetry Soup, and came upon your poem- "what manner of a mortal I would be to swim there in your lake", love the depth of your sentiments expressed so beautifully.
Brown Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Vee. Love, Carol
Konos Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:58 AM
Sonar is unable to measure the depths of your Silver Lake.
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