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Silver Girl

silver girl cool and untouchable created of moonlight and mist pale as the snow egrets feasting in the shallows time can not reach her never laid its withering hand upon her brow. alone forever wrapped in her own existence she sails through life leaving nothing her legacy invisible.

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Silent One

Date: 9/9/2019 12:43:00 PM

I dont know if this is a happy or sad person.... No one really wants to be alone..

Eric Ashford

Date: 9/9/2019 8:34:00 AM

Well crafted and touching poem. Well done!

John Fleming

Date: 9/9/2019 8:16:00 AM

Spoken for all of us, Jack. Just sent you a soupmail, Patricia. Really great that you are back here with us all once again. :) john

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/9/2019 6:15:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful dear Patricia!!! Long time no hear! Sending love in vast amounts... Happy Jack XOXOX

John Fleming

Date: 9/9/2019 2:03:00 AM

This is stunning, Patricia!! The imagery is simply breathtaking. "Pale as the snow egrets feasting in the shallows". You could be reading Ezra Pound straight out of the Cantos. Truly remarkable writing. My very dearest regards! :) john

Niall Fulham

Date: 9/8/2019 11:27:00 PM

Hi Patricia, lovely write my friend, wrapped in her own existence she sails through life;;;;;))))Hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/8/2019 5:34:00 PM

Beautiful, Patricia.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/8/2019 7:33:00 PM

Thanks Line