David William Breidenthal Poet I do not know?

Silly Me

My love towards you was so extremely surreal
But I wasn't sure if it was actually real?

 If it was, then that'd be appealing...

Was it real
Or was it a plastic surgery of reality?
Was it surreal
Or was it a plastic affair? 

Tell me if it was a infatuation 
If it was, silly me...silly me...
I still have a mind of a child

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Skat A June 30, 2013 at 7:39 PM ha ha nothing wrong in having a mind of a child. David,. Thank you for sharing <3 ~SKAT~ <3 David William Breidenthal June 30, 2013 at 8:01 PM I didn't say there was anything wrong with it, but thanks anyway for the encouragement and your sweet, awesome comment; have yourself a splendid summer and stay cool, girl.