Silken Laced Moonbeams

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unrhymed tercets

Glistening diamonds sparkle within a thousand star lights wrapped into one holding the highest space Oceans of the night you flicker bewitching charms upon the crest of each wave under the moonlight your royal gaze mesmerizes Reflections carried under intoxicating incandescent lights transfixed adoration crystallized inside your heavenly embrace where a spell unlocks feelings in a million thoughts

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Arturo Michael

Date: 12/11/2017 5:17:00 PM

Hi Liam...I really like your second stanza ... Well written...All the best

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/11/2017 2:24:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Donna Loughman

Date: 12/11/2017 1:41:00 PM

Liam, your pen writes with bewitching charm once again. Well done! :-)