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Silhouettes In the Moonlight




Autumn’s now here, waves lap the shore.

Your strong, warm, bronzed hand holds mine .

Our daughter, grown, loves us forever more.

Our grandson, now a teen, for him, I do pine.

May we live for many years, with kisses galore



Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ricci Avatar
October 4, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Dear Pangie. Hello. My goodness. You have outdone yourself with your execution and poetic expression. Truly. Imagery and more come through to the reader. Thank you for sharing your talent. May this day find you well. Blessings always (smile) PS - Just beautiful Pangie. Truly
Romios Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 8:42 AM
So humbled am I, but your gracious comment. I haven’t done left yet.. I have Sanders I have not reached. This is only a steppingstone. But I am filled with passion, and I hope you expressed that more in my poetry.Graziia, Pangie Coffee time,
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September 30, 2023 at 2:00 PM
Pangie, I love silhouettes in the moonlight, your poem is a lovely tribute to your loved ones… Belle
Romios Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Dear Belle, I am so appreciative of your sweet words. You picked up exactly on my feelings. This poem is simple, but hold much veracity. As you picked up on.. Thank you for your understanding of my soul. Pangie
Eagle Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 11:06 AM
A very romantic piece to enjoy. Creative once again.
Romios Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Greetings Elena, I have a terribly romantic mindset, I vale love and family. Rarely, will I write about worlds I do not live in. I am not that creative. Glad you stopped by! Pangie xx
Situation Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 7:07 AM
On a moon lite night sitting next to wife.
Romios Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 10:41 AM
Good Day TS. Love your interpretation! Which I find quite accurate, to the max! Thank you, Panagiota, xx
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September 29, 2023 at 11:05 PM
Panagiota, Tracing silhouettes in your poetry moonlit skies. Always in a family. -Richard
Romios Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 1:27 AM
Bless you for your ever friendly comments. You are highly valued in the sunlight and moonlight of my heart… Hugs. Pangie xx
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 8:30 PM
Awe, a wonderful tribute to your daughter, grandson, and hubby my friend. I too love mine so..
Romios Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 8:46 PM
So glad you touched my heart just now ..I was feeling a bit sad. Thank you, Eve! Yes, yes, I remembered you shared with me about your husband and how you missed him. I have been on an inner spiritual journey for four days, it was uplifting and peaceful. Let’s be grateful for whomever God puts in our lives and love them. I send you hugs and my love! Pangiexx
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