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Silhouetted Against the Moon

through gaps in clouds moonbeams reveal
two silhouettes entering waters


For Rick Parise's Crystalline Form Contest.

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Paloma P

December 8, 2016 at 4:50 PM

Stunning imagery Charmaine. Succinctly affecting.

Gary Bateman

November 16, 2016 at 9:26 AM

Hello Charmaine!! Congrats on your win. Beautiful imagery for sure. Very well-done!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Kim Rodrigues

November 16, 2016 at 9:05 AM

Pure loveliness, Charmaine! Congrats!

John Lawless

November 15, 2016 at 12:35 PM

Oh, the metaphoric mystery of it....nicely done Charmaine.

Sandra Haight

November 15, 2016 at 9:13 AM

I love the imagery you present in your Crystalline poem, Charmaine. Congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

November 15, 2016 at 7:04 AM

You present a lovely image, while leaving ample space for imagination. Congrats on this fine win. Regards // paul

Jan Allison

November 15, 2016 at 5:01 AM

I knew this would be a winner Charma!:-) many congrats Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

November 14, 2016 at 8:45 PM

A lovely image you created, dear. Congrats for your win.

Carrie Richards

November 14, 2016 at 8:32 PM

I think I can see a beautiful love story in this poem for the imagination !! Lovely crystalline poem, Charmaine!! Congratulations !!! :) Hugs !!

Chris Green

November 14, 2016 at 8:08 AM

There is so much said in these two lines. This beautiful work stimulates the senses and tempts the imagination to see the most wonderful scene. To picture two silhouettes embracing in the moon's reflection on the water is simply gorgeous.

Maurice Yvonne

November 14, 2016 at 7:53 AM

for you are the moon and the sun your quill...you write blessed by the romance of nature...so how could i not fav an inspired write.

Carol B.

November 13, 2016 at 10:24 PM

Stunning!

Alexis Y.

November 13, 2016 at 9:53 PM

Hi Charma You penned such a beautiful sight. The moon looks amazing . Good imagery :-) Alexis

Sunlite Wanter

November 13, 2016 at 6:36 PM

You sent me outside to the moon - literally - tree limbs in silhouette and stars twinkling through the buttermilk. Thank you!

Jan Allison

November 13, 2016 at 5:14 PM

absolutely breathtaking imagery Charma I can picture it so vividly especially with a full moon in the sky tonight! Good luck in the contest this is so so beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

November 13, 2016 at 5:00 PM

You paint a beautiful and romantic scene. I hear tomorrow's moon should be spectacular. I'll be sure to gaze at her and wallow in her splendor for awhile.

James Peranteau

November 13, 2016 at 4:43 PM

The irony dear poet... today I was looking up different forms of Japanese poetry in there unbelievably I found this form... Crystalline... You accomplished a wonderful poetic write! I don't think the form crystalline is a Japanese form... But it was in the poetic propers I was studying today. Anywho great to read you again... Hope you and the Young girly are doing fine.. Much love, james