Silently You Capture Me

You capture me silently,
with your tender gaze
that unveils every peace of my soul
and as time passes by
I suddenly find myself naked.

You capture me with your
beautiful smile
and when we kiss you take
me away like the wind blows
and brings a fresh breeze
on a hot summer day
that fulfill everything without haste.

You capture me with your
kind touch
surround me with love
like a calm ocean that
relaxes me, until I
am at peace.

You capture me fearlessly
taking control of everything
and brings me to a place
where there is no regret or fear.

[You capture me, silently, fearlessly and without fear]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 18, 2010 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Breathtaking Love" Loyda. Love, Carol
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May 17, 2010 at 6:41 AM
Thank you Linda Marie for your comment on my poem. I have read some of your poems and there are awesome, refreshing, well and written. I was wondering if you have written any books of your writing. Congratulation!
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May 16, 2010 at 5:30 PM
Congrats Loyda on your HM in the B.L. contest with these lovely lines so expressive.. enjoy this wonderful honor .. luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S. Linda-Marie
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