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Silently We Watch Night Come

As a bat weaves about in the warm evening air I sip iced tea and rock in my front porch chair A gecko sits upon the wooden window frame Stalking moths drawn to the light through the panes Quail hustle off to settle their brood for the night Always choosing to run instead of taking flight Off in the distance coyotes start singing I look up and notice a spider web clinging Golden sun reflects off the web in the rafters From a neighbors home I hear children laughter The six O'clock train blows its horn going through town Far enough away to be a sad mournful sound My husband comes out, sits beside me, joins hands Silently we watch night take over the land

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/4/2015 11:53:00 PM
Paula, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Enjoy the coming week. Take Care ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/29/2010 9:39:00 AM
Yes to some very pleasant...I had almost the same view in my verse Father? and it was not as pleasant...sigh..Light & love
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Date: 5/29/2010 9:08:00 AM
This scene reminds me of the southwest and the southeast. The imagery is wonderful. This is real short story. I love it.
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Date: 5/28/2010 6:28:00 PM
You have given words a face.
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Date: 5/28/2010 5:54:00 PM
A kodak moment, very vivid write skillfully written for the reader to see the picture you so masterfully painted with your words.
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