Silently We Watch Night Come

As a bat weaves about in the warm evening air
I sip iced tea and rock in my front porch chair
A gecko sits upon the wooden window frame
Stalking moths drawn to the light through the panes
Quail hustle off to settle their brood for the night
Always choosing to run instead of taking flight
Off in the distance coyotes start singing
I look up and notice a spider web clinging
Golden sun reflects off the web in the rafters
From a neighbors home I hear children laughter
The six O'clock train blows its horn going through town
Far enough away to be a sad mournful sound
My husband comes out, sits beside me, joins hands
Silently we watch night take over the land
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A  Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Paula, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Enjoy the coming week. Take Care ~SKAT~
Guzzi Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 9:39 AM
Yes to some very pleasant...I had almost the same view in my verse Father? and it was not as pleasant...sigh..Light & love
Parrish-Spence Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 9:08 AM
This scene reminds me of the southwest and the southeast. The imagery is wonderful. This is real short story. I love it.
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 6:28 PM
You have given words a face.
Nutter Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 5:54 PM
A kodak moment, very vivid write skillfully written for the reader to see the picture you so masterfully painted with your words.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace