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Silently Secretly Sealed

Silently Secretly Sealed If you could see inside a fruitful flower You would see what’s inside my heart For my love for you blossoms every hour As it did from the very first sacrificial start If you could take a look at celestial creation You would explore my spiritual stable soul A cosmic cathedral of justificative jubilation As it is held captive within a giant black hole If you could only see inside me forever falling You would see my sealed silent love for you For one day my heart will come out calling Under the heavens spectacular shiny view Until then my heart and love will deepen Underneath the starry moonlight sleepin'. Dec.02.2017 A special secret Sponsored by: Lewis Raynes

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Date: 12/5/2017 2:56:00 AM
What a lovely sonnet WW, I really love this one. Good luck in the contest my dear friend...Maria
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Date: 12/4/2017 7:48:00 AM
Now this is a great sonnet WW.... Nice rhyme and flow..
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Date: 12/3/2017 9:17:00 PM
Just beautiful my dear friend ^WW^ and I especially love those last two lines :) good luck in the contest! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 12/3/2017 2:21:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 12/2/2017 10:19:00 PM
A beautifully written sonnet. Very touching
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Date: 12/2/2017 8:46:00 PM
Lovely. Very enjoyable read.
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Date: 12/2/2017 5:11:00 PM
Enriched with rhythm and loving words your poem flows beautifully--the secret is safe, WW!
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Date: 12/2/2017 5:02:00 PM
Your words are very tender and sincere. A great poem that reminds me of a secret love and hidden emotions wanting to be found out. This is great and your words made it incredible.
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Date: 12/2/2017 5:00:00 PM
A very special, sweet poem WW. I enjoyed reading this tonight. Well written. Good luck in the contest. :)
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