Silently

Our skin a blanket of glow. Sleep and where is the dream? A coffin of truth messed up with nails and pain. You say you know me and life has no wrongs. Angels disguise the night and wings hurt silent wrongs. Silently the morning of you.

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Daver Austin

Date: 7/28/2014 10:47:00 AM

"Silently, the morning of you." This I like. It says much about the meaning of dreams. Congrats on the selection. daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 5:49:00 PM

Carly, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Skat A

Date: 8/6/2013 8:54:00 AM

Good morning Carly, hope you are well :-) SKAT

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/1/2013 9:30:00 AM

Hello there Carly, welcome to the soup, look forward to reading for you, blessings to you, sueellen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2013 12:54:00 PM

hello Carly, stopping by to see if you had a new post... how about trying out a poem for the Ice King contest.. by poet Skat.. I might try the contest, and call it Ice Queen... hehehe... wink, hope to see a new one from you soon... xox~ LINDA

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/30/2013 10:58:00 AM

hi and welcome, carly... i am amazed by your gothic style.. thanks for the visit... do write again... grreat work!..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/30/2013 9:58:00 AM

- Hello new member: Carly. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/28/2013 6:05:00 PM

Hello Carly, deep... -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/28/2013 12:15:00 PM

hello Carly, welcome to Poetry soup. thank you for sharing your first poem, in which holds the silent night. It's amazing how it works with both beauty and pain. .....luv it....Skat

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/28/2013 7:57:00 AM

This was strong & beautiful, mixed w/a dash of reality check. I really enjoyed this!