Silently

Our skin a blanket
of glow.
Sleep and where
is the dream?
A coffin of truth
messed up with
nails and pain.
You say you know
me and life has no
wrongs.
Angels disguise
the night and wings
hurt silent wrongs.
Silently the morning
of you.

absencefree verse

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Daver Austin

July 28, 2014 at 10:47 AM

"Silently, the morning of you." This I like. It says much about the meaning of dreams. Congrats on the selection. daver

Poet Destroyer A

July 27, 2014 at 5:49 PM

Carly, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Skat A

August 6, 2013 at 8:54 AM

Good morning Carly, hope you are well :-) SKAT

Sue-Ellen Newman

August 1, 2013 at 9:30 AM

Hello there Carly, welcome to the soup, look forward to reading for you, blessings to you, sueellen

Poet Destroyer A

July 30, 2013 at 12:54 PM

hello Carly, stopping by to see if you had a new post... how about trying out a poem for the Ice King contest.. by poet Skat.. I might try the contest, and call it Ice Queen... hehehe... wink, hope to see a new one from you soon... xox~ LINDA

Nette Onclaud

July 30, 2013 at 10:58 AM

hi and welcome, carly... i am amazed by your gothic style.. thanks for the visit... do write again... grreat work!..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 30, 2013 at 9:58 AM

- Hello new member: Carly. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

July 28, 2013 at 6:05 PM

Hello Carly, deep... -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

July 28, 2013 at 12:15 PM

hello Carly, welcome to Poetry soup. thank you for sharing your first poem, in which holds the silent night. It's amazing how it works with both beauty and pain. .....luv it....Skat