Carmen Erickson Poet Blank verse

Silent,Loud,Eternal Poem

Silent. 
Like a feather floating to the 
ground. 
Silent. 
Like a candles flame in the wind.
Silent. 
Like death. 
Loud. 
Like thunder. 
Loud. 
Like sirens on a police car. 
Loud. 
Like a trumpet, blasting in your 
ear.  
Eternal. 
Like the twinkling stars. 
Eternal. 
Like A book waiting to be read. 
Eternal. 
Like night and day. 
Silent, loud, eternal.

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Richard Palmer July 23, 2012 at 5:25 PM great write Carmen,may your SILENT words become LOUD and last ETERNALLY

Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2012 at 12:20 PM So sweet small written poem....like it. - oxox Anne-Lise

Sherese Gooden July 21, 2012 at 9:38 PM Sweet - like this poem.