Get Your Premium Membership

Silent Witness

For few fleeting moments after I died Brain activity remained undeterred Though my knowing now of what I heard Seems redundant in my current reside Heartbeat swapped with footsteps leaving My temperature drops and we are alone Death prompts my body to stiffen on its own A good response to your false grieving Blood settles inside as I discolour My muscles relax as you confess No one can hear, no need to be nervous Anger ceasing as brain waves get duller I fade away, along with all your stress See you at the funeral. Enjoy the service April 5, 2023 I Died Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/5/2023 2:59:00 PM
This feels like interrupted radio signals from the other side - makes it kind of cool :)
Login to Reply
Bueckert Avatar
Hat Bueckert
Date: 4/5/2023 6:57:00 PM
Thanks, I like that take also :)

Book: Shattered Sighs